Mentors
By: Cry & Chris Black
^in that order...
I remember back then...
yes, back then... it was when the real pieces happened,
our mentors bettered us without us havin' to ask them,
when our shit was wack, we were told it was wack then!
and now we lack tens, but still get judged that...
I miss when bad writers were exposed for just that!
"you suck; wack..." replys I got when I dropped,
and still tellin' me I had a "nice drop" when I'm hot....
it was good critiquing, so why stop?
10/10? fuck, back then for me a five rocked...
I was tryn'a be great with dry rot in my structure,
Bounce'd say: "you should'a fixed that line up first,"
and in next piece I'd have "that line" covered....
wrote each piece like it was my lover,
how I smothered each mistake with the right attention,
I liked correction... and how time was essence...
it felt like direction - yep! cry was a feature film,
and Tim, Born, Johnny-6... all worked on makin' that feature ill...
they preached for skill, like spreadin' the word of God...
even a preacher would'a told his people if the Bible was worded wrong,
he wouldn't support them all... he'd do his part unto you...
something that today, isn't hard not to do....
and shit... ya'll are so far from the truth, it all seems radial...
while I'm feelin' like such a Realist that they should call me Gabriel,
correctin' all things insatiable... breakin' the tape on the red door,
stayin' well respected... when I give feed - I get more
but I'm a mentor, and I'm blessed I've made it,
when a piece ain't breathin', Cry's resuscitatin',
vets, let's get up and save 'em... these kids stink,
but watch out, negative feed has 'em windin' to hit shrinks,
-when they should be dyin' to know what guys like Chris thinks...
Honestly, I don’t hate you folks.
When I say something is wack, it’s to make you dope.
I pray you cope, and take all this shit as a lesson,
cause I tried to leave you, but the shit is depressin’.
I wont let you drown, because I see you as my kids,
so I’ll say: “that was trash,” even if you don’t like it.
I’m going to show you the box, and then push you outside it
Crush your comfort zone, and then force you try shit
Smoka said: “vote against me, I’m done with open mics.”
Then I voted for him - an attempt to open eyes.
He thought he couldn’t win just being himself.
I saw something in him, he didn’t see in himself.
He can win the tourney, even if he don’t know it.
I want him to be better - that’s the way that I showed it.
Trust you can grow. Shit, you have the flow, kid.
You’re on the right road, so please don’t blow it. .
. . I feel the same for Mariah - not laughing at her.
I really meant it, when I said she shat on her verse.
She felt pressure to conform, and I know that it’s hard,
So I said: “Fuck the voters, just go with your heart.”
Sometimes I nit-pick cause I know that you’re better,
and I hope you all will please go through this letter.
I want the level of writing to just raise a bit.
If that makes me a bad guy, I’m embracing’ it,
but when I give you feed, stop hating Chris,
Cause you need to worry when I stop saying shit. . .
. .That means I’ve given up on you